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<h2><a href="https://wiki.asterisk.org/wiki/display/TOP/Architecture">Architecture</a></h2>
<h4>Comment <b>removed</b> by <a href="https://wiki.asterisk.org/wiki/display/~beagles">Brent Eagles</a>
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<p>Messaging Layer - This layer is primarily provided by Ice itself, along with some additional development patterns, libraries and other tools that provide some additional functionality to be used in Asterisk SCF components.</p>
<p>uses "some additional" in two instances in the same sentence. Maybe change to:</p>
<p>Messaging Layer - This layer is primarily provided by Ice itself, and includes additional development patterns, libraries and other tools that provide functionality to be used in Asterisk SCF components.</p>
<p>Also, maybe include here, in verbiage, the list of stuff it provides as written in the diagram: "Messaging, Cross-Platform and Cross-Language Data Marshaling and Object Bindings, Event Delivery System."</p>
<p>thus:</p>
<p>Messaging Layer - This layer is primarily provided by Ice itself and provides the event delivery system as well as cross-platform and cross-language data marshaling and object bindings. It also include additional development patterns, libraries and other tools that provide functionality to be used in Asterisk SCF's components.</p>
<p>...</p>
<p>What are examples of those patterns, libraries and tools? Including that information in the description might be a good idea.</p>
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