[asterisk-bugs] [Asterisk 0014049]: [patch] Attempted improvements to ./doc/tex/qos.tex [patch]

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http://bugs.digium.com/view.php?id=14049 
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Reported By:                kshumard
Assigned To:                russell
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Project:                    Asterisk
Issue ID:                   14049
Category:                   Documentation
Reproducibility:            N/A
Severity:                   text
Priority:                   normal
Status:                     assigned
Asterisk Version:           SVN 
SVN Branch (only for SVN checkouts, not tarball releases):  trunk 
SVN Revision (number only!): 162490 
Disclaimer on File?:        N/A 
Request Review:              
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Date Submitted:             2008-12-09 19:07 CST
Last Modified:              2008-12-11 09:40 CST
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Summary:                    [patch] Attempted improvements to ./doc/tex/qos.tex
[patch]
Description: 
Patch included.

I'm not a QoS/ToS/CoS expert, but I tried to improve readability of this
file. I can't vouch for the technical accuracy of my changes, but I'm
hopeful they improve rather than detract from the readability of this
file.

I'm unfamiliar with TeX, so I don't know how to verify that the
presentation (line wraps, etc) are right.
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 (0096201) svnbot (reporter) - 2008-12-11 09:40
 http://bugs.digium.com/view.php?id=14049#c96201 
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Repository: asterisk
Revision: 163037

U   trunk/doc/tex/qos.tex

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r163037 | seanbright | 2008-12-11 09:40:02 -0600 (Thu, 11 Dec 2008) | 8
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Fix some of the grammar issues in doc/tex/qos.tex.

(closes issue http://bugs.digium.com/view.php?id=14049)
Reported by: kshumard
Patches:
      doc.tex.qos.tex.patch uploaded by kshumard (license 92)
      (Slight modifications by seanbright)

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http://svn.digium.com/view/asterisk?view=rev&revision=163037 

Issue History 
Date Modified    Username       Field                    Change               
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2008-12-11 09:40 svnbot         Note Added: 0096201                          
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